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June 16th, 2009 at 1:12 pm
Hello, Sarah.
Your sister Nicola told me to see your site! She is mentoruing me on getting my wheatgrass venture back on track. So if you get your diet on track we’ll both win!
Just thought I’d offer words of encouragement. Good luck!
My wheatgrass is now available at http://www.tonicattack.com
Also I am now about to start a raw diet, although it may take a day or two to be fully implemented plus the usual interruptions of eating out etc. It is the only way to go for sure. Saw a good piece on Matt Monarch/Angela Stokes email today on losing weight when raw and why it sometimes takes ages or even doesn’t happen. So good luck on the mission.
You are doing the right thing, and just be happy doing it as well as you can.
Best wishes
Oliver Dowding
info@tonicattack.com
June 17th, 2009 at 10:58 am
Hi Oliver – great to hear you’re in to healthy natural living too… I’m working on my visualisation for this as I keep sabotaging myself.. aargh!
I’ll check out your site for sure and wish you all the best with your venture – you’re gonna be doing great things for people by getting yourself back on track
Sarah
**UPDATE: Hi Oliver, have just taken a look and here’s some feedback:
- umm starting with your choice of domain name, the use of the word ‘attack’ in it makes me feel uneasy
- you say it doesn’t need to be chilled and it has extended shelf life.. as someone who is looking at eating and drinking things in their natural state (unprocessed), and a large percentage of people interested in wheatgrass I’d assume would also be like this, I want to know HOW you are able to do this. As if your product has been ‘tampered with’ I’m not interested in it and not knowing how you can do raises the question in my mind that it has been
- I would use pictures of healthy, smiling people in your pages, photos of your product in the packaging and in a glass, and your testimonials in quote marks within your pages, not just stuck as an afterthought as the last click option – also making it so people have to click again to see any testimonials is a bit odd
- a FAQ would be great
- why are your web pages confined to such a teeny tiny box?
- why do orders placed in the UK take so long to arrive? are they coming from abroad??? if so will I have to pay import taxes?
- is the packaging recyclable?
- ohhh I just managed to find the order now link… and it takes me to someone else’s website which was kinda unexpected. Makes me feel like I spent all that time on your site for no reason.. and ummm… from your perspective you have not managed to gain any of my details to market anything to in future. As a customer I feel a bit deceived as I thought I was going to buy from you and I have no reason to go back to your site ever again. I presume you will get recurring affiliate commission from orders I place, if any, thru the real site.
Ok, so if this isn’t your product but you are an affiliate I have a few suggestions…. Change your domain to something more friendly and redirect traffic from this one to your new one. Set it up on a wordpress platform and make yourself known as the expert on wheatgrass and all benefits related to that. Promote Vegus and other related products / services eg. juicers, wheatgrass seeds, etc etc as recommended by yourselves… Do reviews, comparisons, make videos on how to grow wheatgrass, etc etc.
Anyway I’ll stop blathering on! lol
Good luck